VicariousE 2014-09-20 03:40:45

Hey, glad to know you're alive! 'Interactive', does that mean Flash per se? Have you taken any creative writing courses, maybe like an afterschool lit club?

(more) Weird question(s), have you been running into your sisters old teachers, and if so, how have they been treating you? How's Mel been doing, she hardly comes here anymore :(

VicariousE 2014-09-20 17:38:23

This might work as a tutorial http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/468379 Going nuts trying to find what I saw a few months ago, would've been perfect!

I could've done an after school thing on creative writing, but there weren't enough chicks doing it lol! If you've read a lot of different stuff over the years, it shouldn't be a problem. The key is to structure it so the reader/viewer doesn't get bored. One trick is to have the main character go through good and bad experiences, alternatively, like: +-+--+-++

VicariousE 2014-09-20 17:48:46

I learned it in a movie screenwriting course... Gotham Writer's Workshop in lower Manhattan, but they have centers everywhere and an online thing too. http://www.writingclasses.com/index.php

Do you have any written works on your dA account I could look at? Lol, you probably don't need help at all, and on the rare occasion I see one of your art pieces pop up here, it's always an improvement.

VicariousE 2014-11-15 22:07:26

Oh man, been so busy getting my stuff together, just so I can move temporarily somewhere else! If you're going to move, do it before you collect a lot of junk lol :) It just sucks I have to leave my ancestral home right before Christmas, as well as have the containers packed away, into whatever I'm living in... still waiting to hear from a prospective landlord on whether my credit/criminal/insurance rating is good enough :\

How are your folks doing, well I hope? I'm glad I'm the baby of the family, my parents already figured out the easiest way to raise me, so the drama wasn't quite as high as with my older bro and sis..

VicariousE 2014-11-16 21:24:49

Eh, it depends where parents are in their relationship with each other too I guess. My sister's here to see to the wrapping up of the farm, and we were just talking about that.. so I'm glad I came along when I did, after things settled down! Of course, there's an almost 20 year difference between my bro and sis, sigh.

VicariousE 2015-05-14 07:16:08

So busy... I'll get to your PM soon... in the meantime, wanna get practical?
http://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1389190

VicariousE 2015-05-19 11:20:50

Good luck continuing the story, throw an NG character or IRL person in if you can!

VicariousE 2015-06-29 11:14:16

I hope you don't mind, but I restructured 2 or 3 of your sentences in the 20th Birthday piece, just to make them a little easier to read at speed. Have you seen Tom's finale to the story?

I'm really sorry I haven't responded to your PM, but I lost my internet connection in late May, and may not be able to get it back... for another few weeks :O Hope you're enjoying summer break!